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CHAPTER 4

And so the plan was a go.
Purrfecta and Hissary were standing besides some lockers, waiting for Seraphina to turn up in the corridor on a very monsterly morning. Ghouls were busy chatting but the sisters could hear the faint drifts of the recent news about Hissary and her confession. Suddenly the Aria appeared in central areas, a satisfied and triumphant smirk plastered on her face, as she could hear the chattering too. Then out of nowhere, Purrfecta pounced.
"Hello! How are you? Nice outfit, I like the shoes!" She greeted happily, as Seraphina was taken by surprise as the cat girl wrapped an arm around her shoulder. It was kinda uncomfortable for the other girl, too tight for her liking. Then again, she didn't like spontaneous hugs from hyper ghouls. "Dear, I don't know you, so get away from me!" Seraphina growled, slapping away the girl's arm as she started walking in the opposite direction; but Purrfecta was in front of her, stopping the female Aria in her tracks.
"Sorry! It seems we got off on the wrong paw. I'm Purrfecta Stripes!" Purrfecta introduced, thrusting out a hand with very elongated claws. Seraphina glanced the dark chocolate striped feline fully, noting the familiar appearance.
"Well, hello there dear." The Aria took the clawed hand, shaking it; a sly smirk crossing her face. "Do I suspect a relative of Hissary Stripes? You know the recently confessed gay girl?" Purrfecta cut the handshake short, forcing a smile on her face. "Yes, she's my younger sister...why do you ask?" Seraphina's smirk grew wider, "No reason, dear...just wondering if the whole homosexual thing ran in the family." Purrfecta tensed, the ends of her lips starting to twitch.
"What!? No, I mean--"
"Aw, apparently the Stripes family is still trying to find themselves." The Aria said, talking louder with each word. The crowed hallway seemed to stop, listening in to the growing conversation.  Hissary raised an eyebrow, looking towards her sister; encouraging her to say something. The older werecat looked towards Seraphina, a look of worry crossed her face. 'I don't think this is going to end well...'
"We are not trying to find ourselves!" Purrfecta retorted, crossing her arms and hoping that was the end to the conversation.
"Oh really, dear?" Seraphina gave a look of question, crossing one arm, while putting her other arm and hand under her chin. "Maybe it's just you and Hissary trying to find themselves then?"
The Aria's sly smirk slid back on her face, "That would make sense. I heard that you two are getting serious. You know, incest relationship?" Both Hissary's and Purrfecta's jaws dropped, their eyes got wide and their eyebrows raised. The monsters around seemed to crowd closer, taking in all the words.
"Where in the world did you hear that!?" Purrfecta screeched, her arms uncrossed, a look of disbelief on her mocha furred face.
"Oh? So it is true? How purrfect." Seraphina lowered her voice, containing her laugh while still having that sly look.
"Wait, no!" Purrfecta managed to say before Hissary dragged her out of the spot light.
"Where are we going!?" Purrfecta squeaked, shaken up by the conversation with Seraphina.
"To the ghoul's room." Hissary simply stated, dragging her shaken up sister behind her.

"What our we going to do now? Are plan failed miserably." Hissary said, ending her sentence with a small hiss; she leaned up against the ghoul's room sink's, crossing her arms. "Um..." Purrfecta muttered, regaining herself, she stood in front of her younger sibling. The ghoul's room in which they were in was brightly lit, but the warm fluorescent lights wasn't very comforting for the two ghouls who stood under it's light. Purrfecta stood there, one hand on her hip the other by her side; she bit her lip thinking of what she -they- could do to stop the nasty rumors.
"I got it!" The older werecat suddenly exclaimed after a few minutes of silence; her face brightened.
"Don't just stand there tell me!" The younger werecat said in anticipation.
"How about we prank Seraphina?" Purrfecta stated, a look of triumphant on her face. Hissary unfolded her arms and looked at her sister as if she just said the dumbest thing on the planet. "And how is that going to stop any of the rumors?" The younger mocha furred werecat hissed.
"If we can't beat 'em, join 'em!" The older werecat explained, getting more excited by the minute. "...I don't follow." Hissary stated, looking confused.
"I'm saying, if we can't stop the rumors Seraphina started, why not beat her at her own game? All we have to do is prank her, and make sure at least a majority of the student body sees!" Purrfecta tried to explained. "If we embarrass her enough, we might be able to get her to stop the rumors about us!"
Hissary's eyes widened; she wasn't one for pranks. She finally let out a long sigh. "If it's to clear up those rumors, I am all for it."
Purrfecta let out a little squeak, and jumped for joy. "That's the spirit!" The older werecat hugged her younger sibling, letting out a small purr. Hissary pushed her overbearing sister away, letting out a soft growl.
"What are we waiting for? Let's go prank that Aria!"

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" I know Monster High would probably be accepting to bisexuals and homosexuals, "Be Yourself. Be Unique. Be a Monster."
But,
What if that was one thing Monster High was normal about? The fact some people, or monsters, can't accept gays and bisexuals?
I'm sure they wouldn't care about others sexuality...but what if someone's sexuality was brought into the spotlight? That is where the story begins here, a closet gay, Hissary, sexuality is brought into the limelight, where others question, make fun, and just provoke her asking if this said rumor is true?
Well,
is it? "


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FREAKING FINALLY.
Another chapter to Impurrfections! Took long enough. XD
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Main Characters;
:bulletred:Hissary
:bulletorange:Purrfecta
:bulletyellow: Seraphina
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Shout-outs;
:bulletred: ~k30g1998
:bulletorange: ~Maryritai
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Hope everyone enjoys this, && PLEASE, do critique! Tell me the mistakes! Tell me what you think! Tell me your ideas on how to improve it!
Any, if not all, help is very much appreciated! :love:

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Critique from Zena, coming on up! Anyway, this critique might suck, I'm doing this at night, blah blah blah, and I have to reach 100 words. Anyway, I'm just going to point out a few errors.

Seraphina was taking by surprise
taken, not taking
"What are we going to do now? Are plan failed miserably." Hissary said,
Should the 'are' be 'our'?
All we have to do is prank her, and make sure at least a majored of the student body sees!
Should majored with majority?

Plot wise, it's going great so far! I really love all the characters in it, and I can't wait to see what would happen next! The plot twist of a rumour of an incest relationship is really interesting, and I'm dying to know how it would affect their reputation. So far, so good, Riddle, and continue this story!
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:iconk30g1998:
Holy hell. I need at least a 100 words or more.....
So, this is.......... so swagalicous. And it has loads of swag.
And I like your choice in wordings (even though I have no idea what half of those words mean)
I cant wait to find out what happens next *sarcasm* No Jk.... I cant wait to see how much swag and awsomeness its going to have. Erm......... 31 more words (28) Um do you get ummm...
∞/EVERYTHING MmK? Ok. Now Im stalling because Idk what to say. SO MUCH SWAGGGGGG. Ok? Ok. Yup. So....... 5
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~Maryritai Jul 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Good work, My girl ^_^
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~iEatIdiots Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SO MUCH APPROVAL FROM ZENA.

ZENA HAS NO IDEA HOW TO CRITIQUE THIS.
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:iconalittleriddle:
8DD YAYAYYAYAYAYY

YOU WILL THINK ON HOW TO CIRTIQUE THISSSSS *waves hands around*
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~iEatIdiots Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HMM. I WILL.
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~iEatIdiots Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DONE. Yay.
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:iconalittleriddle:
YAYAYAYYAYAYYA
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~iEatIdiots Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYAYAYAYAYAY.

Hope it's good quality.
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:iconalittleriddle:
GOOD ZENA GOOD.

I LIKE CIRITQUES. :dummy:
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